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My name is Jasmine Allison, and I am 15 years old. I strive for success and happiness. I am fluent in both English and Welsh, and extremely proud of my heritage. Science and law appear as my strongest passions, however, I'm constantly searching for doors of opportunity. I strongly believe, as quoted by George. H .W. Bush, "Any definition of a successful life must include service to others".


318 Comments » for Are you truly who you think you are?
  1. Allen Benjamin says:

    Well said , Best wishes …!

  2. Deniz Yengin says:

    Wow your essay is really good and amazing actually i can say the best essay i have ever read.

  3. Batoul says:

    Wow !! Amazing????

  4. Batoul says:

    Amazing

  5. Halil Rifat says:

    Thank you Jasmine for this post. I am glad to see someone of a young age anonymously on the internet give their opinion and voice for the world to see. I am from the middle east , being one of the more targeted areas for racism. You know what we are all called hear. I am glad to see people like you fight for us. Thank you Jasmine. – Halil Rifat

  6. Tasya Salsa Sabrina says:

    I think thats great essay, I also hope that there will be no more discrimination in the world

  7. Alison says:

    As an older person, looking from the outside in, I’m very saddened to say it takes a 15 year old to put points forward that all of us should of carried out years ago as a human race maybe the world would be a better place

  8. Amen says:

    Good jasmine

  9. Jasvir Boparai says:

    Hi jasmine. i read your eassy and i understand it well but my English is not fluent. I’m beginner in English.so, i can’t text much about it.but, yes now it’s necessary to make new strategy for bullying and need to spread much awareness about it. Also, we have to take some new steps for it and make a peace among youth and children and encourage them to fulfil their dreams and give efforts to their new idealogy about to cahnge world with good cause. Thank you. Nice job.well written. Keep it up????

  10. Asrar Sehimi says:

    Nice

  11. No OR says:

    Incredible

  12. Mk says:

    Amazing dear

  13. Qqing says:

    Keep the hardwork and I am sure you will success with your positive vibes.

  14. Efan Headford says:

    The essay is very well written overall, with little to no errors of any kind.

    The information is accurate, and the citing of sources is an appreciated touch. I agree with the points raised, and would support any form of campaign to spread the awareness mentioned in the above essay.

    All in all, it is an excellent essay, one I would recommend any of my friends to read. It’s sad that some people are so ignorant, and not willing to accept that things need to change.

    Great work, Jasmine!

  15. Ayush Jain says:

    A thought provoking essay! ???? Great work ! ????????

  16. Elena says:

    Well done . 🙂

  17. Abdu says:

    Very good ????????????
    You are really gifted

  18. Amina says:

    Wow greaat essay ????????

  19. Kristín Edda Valsdóttir says:

    Wow, really good. Best of luck to you????

  20. Samuel Ukpai says:

    Good job

  21. Marisela Colombine says:

    Hey Jasmine! Thanks for talking about such a subject so open-mindedly. This is an important topic that should be discussed more frequently and I believe you’ve done a great job doing it.

  22. Seba says:

    Great essay! Very well written. I wish you best of luck.

  23. Jannie Rose S. Javier says:

    Well said! This is one great essay.

  24. Abigail says:

    This is amazing

  25. Riyazuddin chauhan says:

    ????
    ????
    ????????Great!
    ????

  26. Ankit Raj says:

    Supb….

  27. Omar says:

    It made me think a lot, amazing!!

  28. Ammar says:

    As a review for your essay/article I must say it was well structured,researched and occupied by some estimable facts. However it was hard to sought out some catchy lines, thus for the purposes of improvement you need to add some catchy lines at the conclusion and in the beginning, the lines could be some revolutionary quotes by some philanthropist e.t.c . Besides that the essay was far more good for a girl of your age, keep it up????.

  29. Kincső Kovács says:

    This is so cool! Good job! (: I am so glad because I read it. Thank you!

  30. Ayub 22 says:

    Amazing

  31. Milica says:

    Jasmine,you did a great job here!I like the way you look on this interesting topic.
    This world needs more people like you.
    Keep up the good work! 🙂

  32. Marie says:

    Loved it, thank you for talking about this topic it really made me proud as a women of color that it is not my fault for being who I am or for not having the same opportunities as other people/minorities it’s just that some people don’t understand that we are all one race ,the human. I am just a different shade but my skull insides and my body is structured the same way someone who has dark or fair skin then me. Overall we will overcome this obstacle if people get the mind set that jasmine explained in her essay. The essay is amazing and gave me another reason to strive for the better.

  33. Renaldi Pratama says:

    Great Explanation, I like it Jasmine ????????

  34. Mohamed says:

    Good luck, Jasmine. Very well-explained article. ????????

  35. Chris says:

    Yes this is quite true. I’m saddened to think that we still live in a society where prejudice exists. However, I also believe that lack of tolerance plays a role in the society.

  36. Emma mercy says:

    Wow! This is fabulous. The essay is fluentual and can make amends to many people. Continue with the same spirit

  37. Menna Taha says:

    This is an incredible job you did here! I couldn’t believe you’re only 15; really glad people like you exist. You’re smart and gifted, keep it up✨

  38. Ahlam Hagouch says:

    Well said… Keep on

  39. Trizah says:

    Wooow more people should get to see this it’s nice

  40. Aristotle Bougas says:

    Each hour of effort you put into that really paid off. It does a great job communicating some very complex and deep emotions clearly, something that I know isn’t easy to do. Very well thought out and sophisticated, well done.

  41. Martin says:

    Good job!

  42. Elyssia Hughes says:

    Wow, this essay is amazing! Well done dear ????

  43. Alex Trombini says:

    It’s certainly a very interesting essay and topic. Congratulations!

  44. Ibrahim Mohamed says:

    Amazing. Well done ????

  45. Neda says:

    I wish you the best of luck!

  46. Nensi says:

    I wish you the best of luck!

  47. robby says:

    Good jasmine

  48. Jinnie says:

    It’s a good essay! Wish you the best of luck!

  49. Rafli says:

    Such a well written essay. Keep on writing. You did a great job 🙂

  50. Anchal says:

    Amazing writing

  51. Cameron says:

    Great job! Loved it

  52. Jihan says:

    Keep going ☺️

  53. Nesha Mutiara says:

    You’re still very young but your ideas and mind are like a pro! Keep it up ????

  54. Anastasia says:

    Great essay! Unexpectedly impressive????

  55. Sierra Warren says:

    You have a good point ????????

  56. Shnyar Taha says:

    Well done dear U are very strong person very intelligent wish U the best

  57. Ghada says:

    Keep on ????

  58. Esriel Ferrari says:

    Nice job! You wrote a such important essay about a big problem in our society: inequality and a Sustainable Development Goal is a way to solve it!

  59. Mariam Soneja says:

    This was well articulated and I thoroughly enjoyed the points you listed. It was brilliant to point out a different POV on the same problem and offer a solution as well. Good Luck in your future!!

  60. C. R. says:

    This is really great ????

  61. Albion says:

    Nice job

  62. Amaya Harris says:

    Wonderful essay!!!

  63. Sara says:

    It’s really nice! Good job!

    • jocky jack says:

      Woww so inspirational, and very encourages essay i like this. Your doing good job.i’ll pray to your success. keep it up????????

  64. Atharva Bhagwat says:

    Great essay Jasmine !

  65. Basna Hakkim says:

    That’s amazing. Keep it up. ????

  66. Basna Hakkim says:

    You are having a good thought.

  67. Jham says:

    Hello Jasmine, your essay is incredible! Keep it up! ????

  68. Kamola says:

    Really detailed and completely understandable essay. You could open your theme as none else) Keep on, Jasmine, good luck!)

  69. jocky jack says:

    Woww so inspirational, and very encourages essay i like this. Your doing good job.i’ll pray to your success. keep it up????????

  70. Michelle says:

    This is an incredible essay!????????

  71. Kashish Bhatia says:

    Nice

  72. Amera says:

    I enjoyed how you addressed pressing issues and took us through the details of inequality

  73. Amy says:

    I hadn’t realized how prominent racism is in older generations until my father started making comments that disturb me. I’m glad you highlighted that’s issue in your essay.

  74. Dharmendra Ahirwar says:

    Superb

  75. Abdullahi says:

    Nice and wish you the best

  76. Keith says:

    Amazing????

  77. Manar Hamed says:

    Great job jasmine

  78. Kavya says:

    An insighful essay

  79. Michelle says:

    Truly amazing!

  80. Elsa says:

    Very interesting!

  81. Ahmed M. Galal says:

    It is just an incredible essay!
    I really mean it ????
    I think that I’m going to read it again ????
    Keep it up! ????????❤️

  82. Sarah says:

    That was such an amazing speech Jasmine. Your voice definitely needs to be heard by everyone in this world. Bravo ????????

  83. Ahmed says:

    Awesome
    Thank you very much for your great words

  84. Nathalie says:

    I love it Jay
    It’s really insightful and inspiring
    Well done

  85. Melanie says:

    Great essay, very nice!

  86. sujan kafle says:

    nice

  87. Egla says:

    Such a great essay!
    You’ve done a great job! ????????????

  88. Jasmine Hearty says:

    AMAZING!! I can’t believe someone so young can be so insightful! Very well said!!

  89. Rahaf says:

    Great essay, hope you win

  90. Ashley Robinson says:

    This was beautiful written! Couldn’t have said it any better! Good job!

  91. Pelin Ulker says:

    Wow! You did an amazing job! Congratulations ^-^

  92. Isabelle Piché says:

    This is pretty good! I love this subject!

  93. Mehintaj says:

    Amazing!!! Best Wishes

  94. Hend Ibrahim says:

    ???? great words

  95. Sam Kun says:

    Beautiful, keep going

  96. RéEhaN Ali says:

    You wrote a awesome essay wish u good luck

  97. RéEhaN Ali says:

    Superb essay

  98. Maroua benelhaouare says:

    That’s awesome . I liked your essay , keep it up

  99. Charlie says:

    That was impressive!

  100. Lili says:

    Good essay ????

  101. Fatma Hussein says:

    am speechlesss its a great essay keep it up the same spirit

  102. Vida says:

    Amazingly ????????????

  103. Bram Debrouwere says:

    Looks good! Keep it up!

  104. Lucy says:

    Great ????????

  105. Felisitas says:

    Good topic, Jasmine. I hope no racism again in this world

  106. Ravien Sri says:

    This is real good!

  107. yousef 3raffa says:

    congratulations

  108. bradley Kenji says:

    Wow amazing

  109. Rukhma Yaqoob says:

    Its tooo good

  110. Odumegwu chinenye says:

    Nice right up,keep it up,amazing.
    Am serious I love it dear.

  111. Luisa says:

    Well done!

  112. Bahar Yılmaz says:

    That’s a great essay!! Keep it up ???????? I really like it!! Best of luckkkk ????????????

  113. Alex says:

    Great… I really like your introduction. U are an amazing writer. Best of luck????????

  114. Veronika stafa says:

    Such a great essay! Love it!

  115. Mayhanna says:

    Good luck

  116. Sami hamrit says:

    Nice

  117. Raysa says:

    Incredible way to speak up the truth!

  118. Abraham says:

    Nicely written .❤

  119. Pitigoi Lucian says:

    Wow…that is aswome

  120. Dar says:

    This is such a great essay! Well done!!!

  121. Jess le says:

    An excellent piece of writing, but it could defintely be longer

  122. Rishi Gupta says:

    Good one…keep it up..!!

  123. Complex says:

    Amazing

  124. Lê Ngọc Hà says:

    Nice Jasmine

  125. Maria says:

    Wow, this is simply an amazing essay!!!!! Well done and I wish you best of luck in the competition ????????????

  126. Haya says:

    Great job

  127. Juana Granados says:

    Interesting!!! ♥️

  128. Solomon Zaphaniah says:

    Awesome … Wish you well dearie

  129. Saray says:

    Great essay!

  130. Mohammed Junaid says:

    Its important

  131. Mahajabin says:

    It’s a really nice essay….
    Keep it up honey……all the best….

  132. Zahra says:

    Very beautifully written ! It’s an amazing essay!!

  133. Julia says:

    Wow, you rocked it, girl!
    Keep up the good work and you will hugely successful! Glad I read this!

  134. Nicole Kwamboka says:

    Amazing essay ✨

  135. Annisa says:

    That’s a great essay, jasmine

  136. Jeanine Vilema says:

    This is Amazing . Well done

  137. Yashna Radeecanah says:

    Amazing ❤ Well, best of luck for the competition…

  138. Saad ahmad says:

    Amazing topic with great sence of humanity

  139. Iman says:

    So refreshing to read!!

  140. Iman says:

    Amazing!!

  141. Kinga Stusik says:

    It really makes you think about what makes humans actually humans and how origins had an impact how we portray the world. Amazing ????

  142. Anxhi says:

    It’s amazing

  143. Sofia says:

    Really good ????????

  144. Patricia Gaju says:

    I liked very much your essey. It was well structured, you had good argumests and a lot of exemples. Well done

  145. Arjun Jain says:

    Pretty good. All the information is on point and really well put. Great job.

  146. Norjannah Awar Masorot says:

    Impressive idea????????????

  147. Norjannah Awar Masorot says:

    Impressive idea

  148. Mena Mohammed says:

    To be honest best eassy i’ve ever read

  149. Farhana Ishak says:

    Such a wonderful essay Jasmine. You are still young, keep it up girl!!

  150. Aldrin says:

    Impressive and great essay 🙂 This essay open my mind and it’s content is informative. Good job

  151. Arda Kœkten says:

    I must say it’s heaps good ????

  152. Erwin Esperanza says:

    Wow…it’s such a heart-opening essay. I hope people would consider the fact that even if we are on one nation, one culture, one tradition, and one belief, we still came from different indiviaduals.

  153. Erwin Esperanza says:

    Wow…it’s such a heart-opening essay. I hope people would consider the fact that even if we are on one nation, one culture, one tradition, and one belief, we still came from different indiviaduals.

  154. Shamim Lycan says:

    awesome…best eassay i’ve ever read…bravo Jasmine

  155. Umesh says:

    Well done ????
    Gud job dear????

  156. Md. Abdus Sobur says:

    Nice writing on great point of view. Your research was also good.

  157. Seyed Mehrbod Naseri says:

    The essay is quite sophisticated in the sense that it captures the essence of the problems and humbly manages to introduce the reader to what dwells in the mind of the author. Although lacking in solid arguments and what one might call “supporting cases”, the speculative nature of the author provides a platform for any reader to ponder upon. The rhetorical questions seem to ring out like gunshots in the black matter of the mind. Overall, this essay not only scratches the surface, but manages to dig deep to the core and for that I must congratulate the author.

  158. Kevin says:

    Really good essay ????

  159. Sayantan says:

    Very good.

  160. Siti Normasitah says:

    Hi jasmine.wow you are pretty good at this.this essay,i love it.

  161. Erin says:

    Wow, I love the way you put this. It great to see other young people who care about making a difference. I think you’re going to do great!!!

  162. Phillip says:

    Well said Jasmine

  163. Benedict Dolo says:

    Your easy is very interesting:this one of the best easy I have ever seen in my life

  164. Benedict Dolo says:

    Impressive idea

  165. Dorotea says:

    Very well put! Great essay

  166. Kaitlyn says:

    You did a great job on your essay! Your evidence was great, and you thought of things to include that we very unique and stood out! One thing to improve upon would be to establish more specific things that we can do to change the status quo. Also sometimes it is confusing to follow your points so transitions would be good to work on. Overall the essay was great and you are such a good writer!

  167. Manuela Hernández says:

    I really loved your essay. It makes you think about a lot of things that are happening right now in our world. One of the most amazing essays I’ve ever read.

  168. Varaidzo Sally Chitimira says:

    I loved reading this essay! Well-done!

  169. Nikola says:

    Well said.

  170. Mazen Adam says:

    Great , well done ????

  171. Matthew says:

    Great piece and glad you put it forward!

  172. Aymene says:

    Great job, u touched some sensitive point ????????

  173. Ayla says:

    This is truly amazing????????

  174. Aditi says:

    Very well written, 100% agree with all your points

  175. NadaElhagar says:

    That’s a great essay ???????? Well done

  176. ND says:

    Wow!it is amazing,also the informations and your ideas are amazing and very well said.

  177. felita aurelia says:

    Yours is the best essay, and i love the topic that you’ve choose.
    Success!!!well done ????

  178. Oliver Wright says:

    A very well written essay, congrats.

  179. Eleonora Mitreva says:

    Incredible essay, you are only 15 and you have such a strong opinion. Continue in that way, the world needs more people like you.????????

  180. Meriem says:

    I found your essay very brilliant and I hope it will be truly understand around the world. We are all from the same planet we shouldn’t fight for something such pathetic like appearance, power or propriety.

    Best wish for your essay.

  181. Katrin Lilienthal says:

    Very good essay!!! Love it

  182. Beatriz says:

    this is amazing, well done!!

  183. Blessy says:

    I agree with you on your point that all it takes to stop human from hurting other human is awareness.
    I believe that people believe that today’s normalcy is normal but in fact not all of it is normal. The mind is tricking them into believing that humiliating others is normal, thinking one is better than others is okay and so on and so forth.
    I hope with your essay, people will be more aware.

  184. Emma Evans says:

    Amazing!

  185. Molly says:

    Great essay and well said.

  186. Fady says:

    Very good essay

  187. Alejandra Moya says:

    Amazing analysis ????

  188. Eloah says:

    Awesome job! Keep up the great work and best luck to ya!

  189. Kimberley says:

    Wow Jasmine that was stunning. I support all of your views and I am in full agreement. Let us all work together in our own way to make this world a better place. I wish you the best Jasmine.

  190. Ahmed Abdelaty says:

    Wow! That was so damn good! You are such a talented person. I hope I can come close to your skill and inellect one day, im 15 too ????

  191. Jamie says:

    Good job, Jasmine. I hope that you will have many more excellent essays. ????????

  192. Luane says:

    Such a relevant subject!! Congratulations, Jasmine!! Amazing essay

  193. Holly Burford says:

    A really great essay! There were a few grammar mistakes (which I would be happy to correct if you like, but no pressure there), but in terms of content, it was very well written and puts a great point of view across! 🙂 I definitely agree with your ideas – ethnicity should never affect the respect that a person recieves.

  194. Jamyang Kunga says:

    I think you are person who are searching for happiness…..so I just want to say “mind is everything “

  195. Jonna Rose Libril says:

    This is impressive knowing from the point of view of a 15 year old girl. That it even hit the bull’s eye of realization in the unknown world.

  196. Karich says:

    Really inspiring! Keep on that way

  197. Ariana Khayamian says:

    Your essay is very well written and gets the point across in a sophisticated yet simple way so that all readers can understand. I found a few punctuation errors, so you may want to look over it once more. Other than that the essay was amazing and very powerful. Great job!

  198. Ryley says:

    So good! I’m your age, and this is a great essay.

  199. Giorgi Jaiani says:

    Great essay. Well done. I liked the “Racism is not born, it is taught” part

  200. Nini says:

    What an essay!! Wow wow wow

  201. Nafeesah says:

    Wow amazing ????
    Well said !

  202. Amra says:

    Very well written and explained. I wish everyone think like that.

  203. Saeed mohamed says:

    AMAZING ????

  204. Saeed mohamed says:

    AMAZING AND INSPIRING

  205. Ali says:

    truly jaw-dropping ! wish you best of luck.

  206. Charles says:

    Woooow! This essay is really amazing!

    Moreover I see eye to eye with you.

    You really rock!

  207. Tenzing Pejawa Lhomi says:

    Well said and i appricate what you have mention above…
    Wish u all the very best in You’re every step….

  208. Yogesh Sharma says:

    Oh amazing essay Jasmine .

  209. Alicia Yoshino says:

    A great essay with a powerful message. I can tell that there has been a lot of effort in portraying the passion for the subject matter. Within this essay, there were some small areas of which can be improved for better comprehension.

    For example, the sentence:
    “Although the anti-bullying policy has proven effective, but clearly not effective enough.”, where the transition is slightly unnatural. An alternate way to write this could be, “Although the anti-bullying policy has been proven effective in some aspects, it has clearly not been effective enough to resolve the issue entirely.”

    While discussing the solution, it is unclear how
    “researching their families’ history” can aid in resolving racism/prejudices within our society.

    The conclusion had a few minor errors:
    “for our children’s health and happiness[,] discrimination need[s] to end here.”

    Asides from these details, it is clear that Jasmine is able to identify the core problem and inspire others to desire action to be taken for a racism/prejudice free society.

  210. Iffah says:

    Ur essay is amazing ????

  211. Ahmad says:

    Great job
    Be successful

  212. Trina says:

    Outstanding essay. I love it..wish you the best

  213. Ahmed Najim says:

    Good subject and info

  214. Oksana says:

    Outstanding! I really enjoyed your essay. Thanks for sharing your position and standing for your beliefs. Good luck!

  215. Ameer Ali says:

    Great essay.????????
    Best wishes for you!

  216. Faith Youssef says:

    Firstly , it is a great report , you have done your research , gave in slot of word and time , in the result what you are saying is true , you have resources that are well at what they do , but in real life , real living humans , were emotions control them , he or she had faced some difficult time at something and learned from the experience , weather good or bad they came with it , some had fought , others got it on plain gold , & others looked for the real truth and searched , when emotions drive you specifically if you lose someone so deeply you are connected to , choice number one will be the best and you may get revenge , if you had all the money in the world but you are too lazy to get your remote to change the TV and hire SB to do it for you , choice two without another word , because you don’t want to think , you have got everything , when you really don’t , all you got is paperwork , choice number three is for people who don’t like sitting with the crowd and doesn’t mind standing alone , these kind of people get killed , kidnapped , played by , and be hidden so they won’t cause a lose specially if they had already. All I am saying is with people hating on people because others lived better or not convinced with what has been created for you , you want what others have you , which slot of people think that way , they won’t care if they were the lastest people on Earth just so they would have what they wanted , nothing is right but all , you don’t get to hate me for being a Muslim and I don’t get to hate you for being a Jew or an atheist or a Christian , if you and I agreed others won’t , black people won’t love white people , because some hate others , and white ones get to be racist about others , yellow ones get to hate both because they are either letting them get involved or it’s people got effected , if we all wanted to be together which is never because we all are taking the wrong leaders , for example , you hate Hitler , I hate George Bush , so I listen to Hitler and you to George , we keep fighting and the winner gets a winning day and thousands of hell , because your family will come to mine and start getting back what is right in their point of view when the truth is we should all pick to forget them because they are gone , they caused harm to humanity from different regions , secondly comes the understanding of what you are committed to , and how much you are willing to fight for it , due to the wide numbers of a human fighting choices , everyone became to want the lead , either their right , stubborn , wrong , unconfident , unqualified , inconvenient … They want it , if we truly want change Justice must be served to all and none is above the law , and for the law to be covering and deals with everything , but then we would be machines , no feelings but the definition of acceptance and we would all be the same , that’s why we should accept the differences & try to forgive if not possible then try to live with it .

  217. Ashtyn Cummins says:

    This is a truly inspirational essay… it talks about the truths of what are happening and what need to stop… that’s what makes this such an outstanding essay!

  218. Maryel says:

    Grat essay ????????

  219. Eisha Ehsan says:

    Its really an amazing essay
    Superb????????
    Best wishes for u

  220. Lizelle says:

    Very well written and extremely informative!
    Good luck! 🙂

  221. Juliana says:

    Good job!! ????????????????

  222. Moaz says:

    Very nice, you are very good writer
    Good luck Jasmine

  223. Josh says:

    Awesome Jasmine!

  224. Undral says:

    Such a good essay ????????????????

  225. Jovanka Angelina says:

    Outstanding essay !! ????????????????

  226. Jokini kamanalqgi says:

    Lovely ????great essay

  227. artjola-kola says:

    Great work!

  228. Jenny says:

    This is an amazing essay!

  229. Furat Ammar says:

    “If we’re all part of the human race, why are people racist?”
    Loved this line, amazing work, keep it up ????????

  230. Tina says:

    You go girl!! Perfect

  231. Homidjon says:

    Great essay Jasmine

  232. Goodluck Alexander Ghikas says:

    Very Good Essay @Jasmin

  233. Goodluck Alexander Ghikas says:

    Very nice essay @jasmin

  234. Johann Zuchel O. says:

    Am amazed by this essay, I loved it.

  235. Gabrielle says:

    Well thought out and articulated. Thank you for bringing this issue to the fore, and for making a valid suggestion to end/reduce our current problems.

  236. Pendu says:

    This is absolutely amazing. So much maturity from a 15 year old

  237. Annabel says:

    Amazing!! ????????????????????????

  238. Noor te says:

    Awesome speech

  239. Natalia says:

    I loved it! keep it up ????

  240. Anida says:

    Great! ????????

  241. Samridhi says:

    Truly written
    Keep up wthe excellent work!! 🙂
    🙂

  242. Bless says:

    Keep it up!!❤

  243. Natalie says:

    A fantastic essay on an important contemporary issue. Well done!

  244. Eyad Alkholy says:

    Go Nail it! Best wishes

  245. huner says:

    Amazing

  246. Minela says:

    Amazing dear girl ❤ Keep it up. You’ll success.

  247. Faina says:

    Your essay left me speechless. Keep it up ! ❤

  248. Nasser Alyafei says:

    keep it Up ????????????????

  249. SAPAT IKNAM says:

    It’s outstanding

  250. Ichrak athimni says:

    Very impressive keep it up!

  251. Raouaa mahfoudh says:

    This is veryy interesting! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up ❤️

  252. Yasmine says:

    Niceee ????????❤️❤️

  253. Tamas Pal says:

    Great

  254. Sarah Makalalag says:

    Wow… Ur 15?! This a well-written essay.amazing… I wish you the best of luck Jasmine!

  255. Imran says:

    Good job jasmie… Well done.. It very informative and impresive essay..

  256. Tia says:

    Good work, keep it up

  257. Emma B says:

    Always a lesson that bears repeating. Also, I believe you meant “prejudiced” as oppose to “prejudice”. In the review process, see if you can organize the structure as well. But the theme and source variety really drive this home.

  258. Atta Panin Boateng says:

    Wow…. Your essay is awesome

  259. Cole Black says:

    This is a great essay with very vivid points. Keep up.

  260. Cole Black says:

    This is a great essay with very clear points. Keep up.

  261. Cole Black says:

    This is a wonderful essay with very clear points. Keep up.

  262. Sundy says:

    This is an incredible work ur doing jasmine i really do appreciate the way ur explaining it and elaborating it ur great keep the good work going the same way !!! Best wishes ????✨

  263. Bijen Chaudhary says:

    Really a excellent essay ????????

  264. Coryal Sylvester says:

    I love this essay. It encompasses all the key points related to racism. It informs as well as it gets you thinking. I would love to read more about your views on this matter. I am from the Caribbean where being “pure” to a specific race is virtually non existant; even though one may look that way. I myself looking outwardly black, but possesing very eurocentic features passed on from my father’s blood line i.e. my nose. As well as indigenious features passed on from my mother i.e. my eyes and upper face structure. And despite no one possesing the “pure” genes of one specific race. There is still avid racism amoung people.

  265. Pragyan says:

    Well written essay…

  266. Ari says:

    Great essay!

  267. Mohamed Ali says:

    This is really good ????
    Keep up with the good work.

  268. Alana says:

    Awesome piece of writing. It’s impressive

  269. Alperen says:

    Such an interesting essay.

  270. Alperen says:

    Such an interesting and well written essay

  271. Klaudia says:

    Very clever, your thoughts are so mature and impressive????

  272. Muna says:

    ????????????????????????????????

  273. Zaya Firdaus says:

    Nicely done!

  274. Nakul NT says:

    Ur thoughts are just faB …Keep it up ????

  275. George Dotse says:

    I love this essay. It really teaches who you are. Great outstanding one congratulation ???? ????????????

  276. Ivana Spaseska says:

    Really amazing essay.????

  277. Omar Haroun says:

    One of the best of its kind

  278. Mehmet Can says:

    Love and acceptance is going to save us all. Thank you for this article.

  279. Rawan says:

    Nice talking ????

  280. lamrot says:

    this is so much,all I wanna say is am apperaciated.wish u all the best.

  281. lamrot says:

    for the truth I really appreciated by ur work,keep going follow ur heart sis… wish all the best and success.

  282. Mek says:

    Such a good essay. I’m glad you picked a topic that is ongoing and affects so many people. Well done!

  283. Varun deshmukh says:

    How i can write this??

  284. Khalid Aidarus says:

    Amazing work very good keep it up

  285. Rita Asare says:

    Wow…well done dear.
    Your essay is really educative and factual.

  286. Savan says:

    Very informative & beautifully presented… Keep writing & God bless u

  287. Sidra says:

    Excellent Jasmin ????

  288. Sanjeev says:

    Nice essay,well said,Good luck

  289. Matt Wells says:

    Amazing essay, strongly worded and very persuasive!

  290. Kevin says:

    It’s wonderful and racism is a common issue in almost all countries..i hope we all see the day when a white man may never be called a honky or a black man may never be called a negro ever again

  291. Ankit Chandnani says:

    Amazing job! Well said!

  292. Merjem Begovic says:

    A wonderfully written essay on a very important topic. I wish you the best with it and I hope you mature into a fine essayist one day.

  293. Merjem says:

    A wonderfully written essay on a very important topic. I wish you the best with it and I hope you mature into a fine essayist one day.

  294. Anonymous Avocado says:

    Great essay!! Good job!!

  295. Osama says:

    Nice piece of work
    Best wishes????♥️

  296. patience Mills says:

    that’s great Jasmine keep it up and that was an inspiration ???? ✌thanks for such an inspiring message

  297. Gabriel says:

    Good Essay… was really thoughtful of you to bring this idea and educate us on the importance of being united as one people not minding the colour, race, sex and abilities.
    Congratulations and keep it up.

  298. Mfon-Abasi Tom says:

    true talk

  299. Tieto says:

    Wow what a great essay. Good job 15 years old do this. Keep it up.

  300. Gaurav Agrawal says:

    ????????????????

  301. Abiramy says:

    Jasmine, great work

  302. Udyan Sharma says:

    Hey Jasmine,
    You’ve written something that’s way beyond the endeavours of what a 15 year old teenager would think of.
    I can say of it as a fine piece with beautifully carved words.
    Good luck with your future writing endeavours.

  303. Anubhav Sarkar says:

    This is really a wonderful piece of work and what you have written is true . We all should be united because makes us all equal . And best wishes for your future.

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